Beginning to revise Elorgo's Tale

Well my simple idea about fixing this piece didn't pan out. Still trying to fix it. Changed the angle of one arm so that it's less of a straight vertical. Tried to use a graphic element to incorporate red into the cloak. That head is still sequestered. Brought in some more imagery into the cloak so that the outstretched hand isn't on a background that pops it so much. Decided that having everything in the cloak red was causing it all to become an indecipherable mush. So I wanted to bring in just a hint of color. I'm thinking the interior of the cloak probably needs to be completely re-done since the overall composition of it wasn't thought out beforehand at all.